Outline/Blocking Examples

Name

Miss Loock

World Literature period 1

25 February 2010

 

Thesis Statement:

 

Even though the Bermuda Triangle will always remain one of the world’s mysteries, society needs to believe in the dangers of flying through the triangle because of its unusual location, its strange occurrences, thousands of disappearances and it’s ever gaining reputation of “theories” towards air-patterned behavior.

 

 

Intro Paragraph:

v    Interest Grabber

v    K9: “Many people have reported seeing portal openings in cloudy skies-strange swirlinglights sometimes accompanied by sounds, temporal distortion and electromagnetic distortions called ‘electric fog’ that can cause a time storm.”

v    Thesis Statement

 

Unusual Location:

v    P3: “North vs. North. Also, passing through the ‘Devil’s Triangle’ is the 80th meridian and an degree of longitude which extends south from Hudson Bay through Pittsburgh then out into the triangle a few miles east of Miami”

v    H11: The Saragossa Sea is located in the east side of the triangle in the Middle of the Atlantic”

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Strange Occurances

v    List sources

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Thousands of Disappearances

v    List sources

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Theories of Air-pattern behavior

v    List sources

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Conclusion

Thousands of Disappearances

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